Joci is on stage alone dressed in black but also barefoot.
He starts sat on the edge of the stage but gradually moves to centre stage.
Behind him the video screen backdrop is very nondescript with lines of dotted
lights loving across. This makes Joci the focus of the performance which has it’s
plus points but also magnifies some of his issues.
Joci's self-penned song is about the memories he has of his father and
how uses the memories in the present. It is obviously an emotionally charged
song and even though it is in Hungarian you seem to understand this is a
contemplative song. The song is unusual as there’s no introduction and goes immediately
into a verse. He sings two verses then goes into the chorus, the verses being
more down beat and the chorus have more of a major chord feeling. After this
Joci does some warbling, which kind of works as it gives the song space before
the backing track becomes a bit more powerful. He then progresses with another
verse and chorus, finishing with another 40 seconds of warbling. Not only is
this far too long bit it feels like it is on the verge of being too high and
you end up on the edge of you seat feeling rather more uncomfortable than you
should. I’d almost prefer an extra verse or extra bit of chorus followed by a
shorter warble.
Because the song and performance are quite plain, there is a
lot of scope for change and improvement. In some ways, I like the fact it is
very minimalistic and Joci has good command of the audience and camera but I
feel that the sentiment of the song could be lost quite easily. Maybe some
family pictures behind him might help or possibly even some dancers, right now
I’m not quite sure. The only other thing that might make the whole thing more interactive
is by incorporating the backing singers needed into the show and using
dance/gesture/mime to act out the song, becoming a more ensemble performance
This is, technically, a really nice song and has great
instrumentation and the syllabic nature of Hungarian really complements the phrasing
and tune of the song. However it is nowhere near as instant as “Origo” his
successful entry from 2 years ago which is why I think something more visual
might be needed to make it click to a wider audience. It’s a good, solid song but unfortunately I
think this might miss out
ARTIST – Joci Papai
SONG – Az én apám (My father)
MUSIC - József Pápai
LYRICS - József Pápai
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